Task 13

Instructions for recording

·         First press play on your recording device and record the conversation

·         Once recorded listen back and start to write up your transcript

·         You need to look out for different types of pauses

·         The different types are

·         (.) this means a short unnoticeable pause

·         (2.0) this is a two second pause

·         (1.0) This is a one second pause and so on…..

·         When someone gets interrupted you need to be aware that you need to start the next persons sentence directly underneath where the speaker before finished to show the interruption very clearly.

·         To have a clear understanding of the transcript when you write it out you must include these pauses.

task 11

Task 11

This extract shows that’s it’s from a children’s book, this is because of the bright colours and the large pictures that are easy to see, so easy for children to be able to read. The text is printed in the corner of the page in a small font, the reason it’s in a small font is so there is room for the pictures as, and the pictures are very eye-catching for the young reader. The text is written on top of the picture in the trees so it is easily seen.

Lynne truss

Her goal is to remind readers of the importance of punctuation in the English language by mixing humor and instruction.

First Draft of Fairystory

little black riding hood

there was once a girl called little black riding hood who wore a long black flowing gown. she needed to go to her nans house to deliver some food to her, yet she could only leave the house when it was pitch black. so she did. once the clock struck midnight she left to visit her nan. it was compleatly silent as she trecked through the forest. until she saw two eyes beem through the darkness at her. soon the beems grew closer snd there stood a tall ferice bear, stopping her in her tracks. 'what are you doing out so late young girl.' said the bear. 'ohh im just of to see my nan'. said little black riding hood. with this the bear tricked little black riding hood into telling him where her nan lived, with this ...

writting a story

 

1.  Get Started: Emergency Tips
2.  Write a Catchy First Paragraph
3.  Develop Your Characters
4.  Choose a Point of View
5.  Write Meaningful Dialogue
6.  Use Setting and Context
7.  Set up the Plot
8.  Create Conflict and Tension
9.  Build to a Crisis or a Climax
10.  Deliver a Resolution
11. read through what you have wriiten
12. cheak for spelling mistakes